I AM BUSY.
Acads. Short film. Acads. Church activities. Acads. Agh.
But I have a new poem, pls feel free to comment. Last night, I just feel so depressed that I feel inspired to write again.
UNTITLED *
Last night, I saw love again.
It waived to me
In its sweetest deed.
It kissed wonderful colors
And brilliant happiness
It's big and red, just like before.
Last night, I saw pain again.
It said hello to me
In that old-fashioned way.
Just like before
When I used to fill rivers
With salty tears and bitter heart aches.
Last night, I saw inspiration again.
It dawned to me
Like an expected ephiphany.
And I am chasing thoughts
Again, and again, and again.
Just like before, hard to capture.
Last night, I saw life again.
It cried to me
Its pain and happiness and solitude.
I felt again my heart
Pump oxygen-carrying liquid
Over my cold body at last!
*You can give suggestions for the title.. hehe.. 
AJa!!
Ang saya naman. Finally nakabuo ka ulit ng isang literary piece. Sana ituloy mo na ang iyong nobela. Para maipublish na natin at maikalat sa mga tao!
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Haahay.. kelan kaya ako makakahanap ng oras para sa novel na yan? hehe..
ang hirap kasi ng demand mo.. haha.. gusto mo kasi parang psycho-ekek.. haha.. gagawin ko yan, wag ka magalala..
lub yoo!
Cai
nice poem, but I hope you can make more great poems kahit hindi ka depressed…
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Let’s both hope for it.. hehe..
I have tried writing while not depressed or something.. uhmm the result is not really satisfactory.. hahaha
Cai
awww… ang ganda naman ng poem mo! good luck sa lahat ng ginagawa mo cai… malapit na ang sembreak, kyang-kaya mo yan sis!
missshuuu so much! ingatz ka lagi ha!
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Wow.. thanks rho!
Nakakatuwa naman na naappreciate mo ang gawa ko.. ahihi.. na-inspire naman ako na gumawa pa ng madami at ipagmalaki dito sa blog ko.. haha..
onga lapit na sembreak, so near yet so far.. ahahaha.. bottleneck na ang mga exams, papers at mga bagay bagay na kelangang ipasa at tapusin.. phew..
miss ya sis!
mwahmwahmwah! ingat lagi
Godbless
Cai
grabe ganyan na talaga pag artista =))
good luck, cai! may 173 pa tayo ^_^
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Heyah Fallacy!
Woot woot.. hindi ako artista.. haha.. wish ko lang.. directress ako ngaun.. as always naman ata.. haha.. kung hindi scriptwriter, director.. waaaaa..
Anyhooo, good job sa ating 173 presentation.. nakalimutan kong sabihin sayo na super taas kamay ako sayo.. ang galing mo! hehe..
go Audio up! go Kingstonites! yeah!
sana maging classmates pa ulit tayo, kahit last sem ko na next sem..huhu..
Cai
beautiful poem Cai! *applause* (may typo lang sa 2nd line, maybe coz you’re too sleepy na)
title? “Seeing again” hehehe… am not that creative with poems talaga. looking forward to more of your literary pieces.
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Onga ano, hindi ko pa rin inaayos.. haha..
Ok lang yan.. medyo hindi rin ako poetic na tao.. *wushu*.. tsaka magaling ka naman sa essays eh.. yey! idol! hehe
Cai
i love ur poem. *Revived*
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Yey! Nakakatuwa naman.. bakit revived? ahihi..
thanks for loving it.. haha.. gawa pa ko ulit para you love it pa ulit.. haha..
Thanks Malaya!
Cai
“Last Night”? hahahaha. ^^
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uhmmm.. pwede rin..
Thanks for the suggestion, Gian!
Cai
hehehhe yun din sana ang isasagot ko e “Last Night” lol! abah gumagawa ka ng short film? mahusay
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Woot woot..pareho pa kayo ni Gian.. haha..
yepyep.. gumagawa.. hehe.. pangatlo na ito.. woot woot..
Cai
im glad ur back,i always dream to make a short film,hope you could do it for me…keep up the good work…luv yahh…
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Hi Momsieeeeeee!!
This is the third one.. woot woot.. Gawa ka na rin kasi ng script.. ako gagawa ng movie..hehe..gogogogo!
Lub yoo too!!
Cai
abah e dapat pakita mo sa min yang tatlong yan
That was both joyous and heart-rending. You are a wonderful poet. As a title, “Last Night” would be my obvious suggestion, but even leaving it “Untitled” kind of suits the mood, I think. Some poems, well, they just refuse to accept titles.
“Eyes Open”.
Nice one! You’re good at this. Look forward to more of your poems!
Posted by Lousy Poet at November 3, 2007, 11:28 amAll comments are moderated. Your comments will not appear here unless approved by the blog owner. Thank you.
short film?!?
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Short film again.
Yup, Kath!
You know how I always wanted to create films of my own.. although this one is not really my own (it’s a church thing), i still heart it..
Cai
Posted by kath at September 25, 2007, 7:45 am